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Commotion ©

Michelle Frew
North Lanarkshire, Scotland
2007

Inside it’s very busy and noisy
No one really knows what’s going on
or what the next person is doing
Just now at this present moment in time
it’s more confusing than usual
Let me out!

Frustration is banging inside
longing to get out but lust
wanting, indecision, insecurity
and anger all want the same thing

Different people for once united
in the same cause
None of them will give way
Stubborn, self pity and self loathing
are blocking the doorway
There’s only one way for them
to be released

But me isn’t ready yet
Me doesn’t know what it wants
or where it’s going
To function, me needs love
Tonight it’s alone



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