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Commotion ©

Michelle Frew
North Lanarkshire, Scotland
2007

Inside itís very busy and noisy
No one really knows whatís going on
or what the next person is doing
Just now at this present moment in time
itís more confusing than usual
Let me out!

Frustration is banging inside
longing to get out but lust
wanting, indecision, insecurity
and anger all want the same thing

Different people for once united
in the same cause
None of them will give way
Stubborn, self pity and self loathing
are blocking the doorway
Thereís only one way for them
to be released

But me isnít ready yet
Me doesnít know what it wants
or where itís going
To function, me needs love
Tonight itís alone



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